Loved your story. Tinged with mystery and taken from a future happening all around us. Well done.
I liked this beginning to a great spy thriller.
Loved your story 'The Drone'
A great ending - or is it a beginning - very menacing.
Thanks also for the flash fiction links.
Great job on "The Drone" - I wanted to read more!
Here's my Friday Flash: http://wp.me/p1MNJe-cw
Great story, Robby! Yes, they do have bigger problems. This little short could be the beginning to a longer story. Well done. :)
Loved that. It felt totally plausible, love the dialogue (you're very good with that) and you made me want to know more!
I liked your flash fiction The Drone. Well done, evocative enough to make me want to read more.
Now I want to know what the bigger problems are...which is exactly the sort of thing a writer wants from a reader. Well done!
Here is the link to my drabble for the week: http://quillshiv.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/thetiniestspy/